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Dancing upon the heart flowers petals
Frolicking through the cotton candy fields
Watching the butterflies fly all ways
Acting like I have not a care in the world

Swaying gently in the breeze
The cat tails tell tales
Listening with a careful ear
Drinking in all they have to say

The the night creeps in sweeping away the sun
Speckling the sky with millions of tiny bright stars
I lay down in the field looking up
Watching as the stars shower down upon me

Gently flowing the warm breeze is intoxicating
My eyelids grow heavy with the thick air
Senses tingling as my body relaxes
Falling asleep with the world whispering good night
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This is a bit different than what I normally put up on this DA account. So give me your honest opinion..

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:icontalonridder:
i love this poem, i so look forward to the next one u can almost close your eye if someone was reading it to u and imagine u were in that feild! looking up at the stars[link]

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THE TOPGUN :pc:
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Well luckily that is the feeling I was looking to give people with this poem. Thanks sweetie for the comment

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:icontalonridder:
well that is the feeling i get from it! xx[link]

chat soon maverick

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THE TOPGUN :pc:
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Though I am not a cat person I am a night person and I do like a nice field with an unobstructed view of the sky to look up at.

It's a nice poem, it made me think of another poet who left an account behind.

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